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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 09:25 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

brian wanna be may and all others who talk shit about us, look at this and tell me its not good or doesn't have any talent!

If you do say that then you are in deep denial

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C1d6ERo_-Ew


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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 09:28 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Marginal, at best.


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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 09:30 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Haystacks Calhounski wrote:

Marginal, at best.


ah shut up, you couldnt do that in your entire life


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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 09:34 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

What a boring piece. Nothing special about it at all.

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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 09:35 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

You're a good player. Although it's hard to imagine what a complete song would sound like.

For some reason I can only imagine it with loud guitars, pounding drums, synthesizers and a female singer


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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 09:38 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

FriedChicken<br><font size=1>The Almighty</font> wrote:

You're a good player. Although it's hard to imagine what a complete song would sound like.

For some reason I can only imagine it with loud guitars, pounding drums, synthesizers and a female singer


yeah it will have loud guitars, drums and synth but our singer isnt a female which is good.


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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 09:39 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<b><font color=009966>?Freya? wrote:

What a boring piece. Nothing special about it at all.


yeah and the talentless garbage you listen to is so special :D


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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 09:43 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I would try to go for a bit of variation. I think the idea is pretty good, and it's well played. But maybe try to do something that is different from the rest.


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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 09:45 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

FriedChicken<br><font size=1>The Almighty</font> wrote:

I would try to go for a bit of variation. I think the idea is pretty good, and it's well played. But maybe try to do something that is different from the rest.


different from the rest? im not sure what you are talking about as this is so different from the garbage they play on tv and radio it isnt even funny.

Also it will sound even better when we put on guitars, drums, bass and vocals on it.


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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 09:50 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Nice net curtains.


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pow wow wrote:

Nice net curtains.


thanks! i like your response since you know that you can't find anything to complain about on the song so you had to talk about the curtain :D


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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 09:54 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

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FriedChicken<br><font size=1>The Almighty</font> wrote:

I would try to go for a bit of variation. I think the idea is pretty good, and it's well played. But maybe try to do something that is different from the rest.


different from the rest? im not sure what you are talking about as this is so different from the garbage they play on tv and radio it isnt even funny.

Also it will sound even better when we put on guitars, drums, bass and vocals on it.


In other words, maybe you should use more variety in what you write. Most if not all of your other songs sound the same, and I'm not saying their bad either. I think what you're writing is wonderful, but you need to keep everything interesting, otherwise your audience is going to get bored.

For instance, I experiment with different genres of music including jazz, metal, vaudiville, etc. It may sound crazy, but it's always interesting to hear an artist with variaty.

Queen is one of the few bands to truly open up their horizons, therefore if somebody like you were to reintroduce that into the musical world it would make a wonderful impression (hopefully).


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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 09:56 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Atheist wrote:

<b><font color=009966>?Freya? wrote:

What a boring piece. Nothing special about it at all.


yeah and the talentless garbage you listen to is so special :D

I listen to Queen, you spac.

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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 09:56 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

its fun to see people in denial


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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 09:56 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<b><font color=009966>?Freya? wrote:

Atheist wrote:

<b><font color=009966>?Freya? wrote:

What a boring piece. Nothing special about it at all.


yeah and the talentless garbage you listen to is so special :D

I listen to Queen, you spac.


besides Queen


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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 10:00 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<font color=FF0033 face=symbol>Freddie wrote:

Atheist wrote:

FriedChicken<br><font size=1>The Almighty</font> wrote:

I would try to go for a bit of variation. I think the idea is pretty good, and it's well played. But maybe try to do something that is different from the rest.


different from the rest? im not sure what you are talking about as this is so different from the garbage they play on tv and radio it isnt even funny.

Also it will sound even better when we put on guitars, drums, bass and vocals on it.


In other words, maybe you should use more variety in what you write. Most if not all of your other songs sound the same, and I'm not saying their bad either. I think what you're writing is wonderful, but you need to keep everything interesting, otherwise your audience is going to get bored.

For instance, I experiment with different genres of music including jazz, metal, vaudiville, etc. It may sound crazy, but it's always interesting to hear an artist with variaty.

Queen is one of the few bands to truly open up their horizons, therefore if somebody like you were to reintroduce that into the musical world it would make a wonderful impression (hopefully).


you are right about variation and we intend to make songs that are different, if you listen to the 4 songs that are on the myspace site you will hear that there is quite a difference.

In the end all that matters is that the song is good, catchy and has alot of emotion in it, i understand what you mean and thanks for the advice


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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 10:01 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<font color=red> Freddie's Valentine! wrote:

I know this may sound mean, but it sounds like the theme song on a video game I have a little bit. I think it's the keyboards.


then you could say the same thing about all the piano stuff freddie played, that its video game music


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Posted: 19 Jun 07, 10:02 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Oh, and one more thing! This is just my advice, but perhaps you could experiment more with chord progressions. Your music just sounds a tad predictable...how about some deceptive cadences or have some more noticable half cadences? Just a suggestion, take it or leave it.


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<font color=FF0033 face=symbol>Freddie wrote:

Oh, and one more thing! This is just my advice, but perhaps you could experiment more with chord progressions. Your music just sounds a tad predictable...how about some deceptive cadences or have some more noticable half cadences? Just a suggestion, take it or leave it.


well i dont think its predictable at all, quite the opposite. If you think this is predictable then i can imagine what you think of all the talentless 3 chord bands on Mtv :)

thanks for the musical advice but we havent taken any music lessons so we dont know anything about reading notes or musical language.


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