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Posted: 10 Sep 07, 22:01 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Hello fellow poet and poetress!
I'm William, my friend Cendrine and I are available to chat poetry live via http://messenger.yahoo.com (it's totally free and no credit card is needed at all.) during the weekends, circa 9 p.m. eastern standard time, Saturdays and or Sundays, how about you? Sometimes we do upon the spur of the moment. We chat poetry, write poetry, lyrics, give ideas, criticism and of course rounds of applause in real time and you are most certainly invited so please get Messenger and join us.
Cendrine's user id is: soulpoetrysite
Her domain is www.soulpoetrysite.com
and mine is: mahlerscom
add us as your new messenger companions and we'll be in conference mode quite soon.
Here's a piece I wrote this morn'.

"Fill"

Typical male
Loneliness availed
Till you came 'round
Last night
In Dreams
Analogical timing
For real scenes
Only a photo
Moving still
A future promo
Lets get our fill
To learn to love again
Lets get our fill
To learn to love again

Hacker of the heart
Mind body and soul
At least I'm left here
In full control
Landlord said by keyboard
She'll get to so start
The elevator was broken
Upon the stairs we'd depart
Lets get our fill
To learn to love again
Lets get our fill
To learn to love again

I dreamed you were talking
From a photograph to my heart
Whole hearted commadere
Blue eyes had me start
We got jilted from lovers past
Set for the future, lets have a blast
Buried in music, lifting for the soul
Skin to skin in Gods bowl
Lets get our fill
To learn to love again
Lets get our fill
To learn to love again


"Fill"

by W. K. Mahler
with the help of a long conversation with Tracy :-)
6:25 a.m. Monday September 10, 2007.

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William K. Mahler
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Posted: 11 Sep 07, 03:13 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

No.


Killed by drones.
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Posted: 11 Sep 07, 06:27 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Oh heck why not.

She said.

She said: “Don’t mind me
Don’t mind me at all
As I am not here
I’m not here at all”

I needed space for myself
For the goodness of you
For my own personal health
Because I don’t know what to do

(She said)

Have it your way
And lock yourself up again
I hope you’ll reach that day
You know how to act like a man

So many questions unanswered
So many ways leading to nothing
All my visions have gathered
But I’m waiting for the bell to ring

Please give me a little space
Some time for me to think
Thousands of demons that chase
Through my head and watch me sink

(She said)

“Have it your way
And lock yourself up again
I hope you’ll reach that day
You know how to act like a man”

Now woman don’t be cruel
In the end I will be better I’ll swear
But don’t play me for a fool
And show me that you really care

Without you this fight will be hard
So show a little bit of sympathy
Try to be there for me for a start
Don’t let me swim in my own misery

(She said)

“You will have to do this on your own
There is no way I can help you now
All the anger and hate you have shown
I wish I could help you with this
But I don’t know how.”



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