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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 10:07 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

This is a demo with me on the vocals, (its not my brother you guys hate;P)

The song is called Nothing Lasts.


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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 10:59 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I gotta say, that new demo is really good. I'd like to see a finished version later on. Good work!

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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 11:06 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

The singing on this demo is rubbish to be honest, which is a pity because the song itself sounded like a good idea.

Maybe you should look at getting in someone who can sing to do your stuff justice.


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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 11:15 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<font color=FF9900>Mr Mercury</font> wrote:

The singing on this demo is rubbish to be honest, which is a pity because the song itself sounded like a good idea.

Maybe you should look at getting in someone who can sing to do your stuff justice.


I'm sorry for the singer, but I agree with Mr Mercury, the vocals are not that good, altough the song itself sounds good (imo).


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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 12:18 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

why is this in
queen - general discussion?
got f-all to do with either

should be in
personal - general dustbin


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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 13:40 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

It should be in personal section

as for the singer drop the accent makes you sound retarded no offense


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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 13:53 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Mercuryworks wrote:

It should be in personal section

as for the singer drop the accent makes you sound retarded no offense


he may not be the best singer in the world but the song itself is better than all the modern garbage music on mtv and radion and better than anything that for example U2 or rolling stones ever did or beatles for that matter.


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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 13:57 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Mercuryworks, it has already been done

http://www.queenzone.com/queenzone/forumnew/forum_topic_view.aspx?Q=1042277


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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 14:26 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

WHAT ???


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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 15:15 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Treasure Moment wrote: better than U2 or rolling stones ever did or beatles for that matter.


You finally got a certain amount of good feedback and you start to say this?!

You're really unbelievable.


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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 15:18 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

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Treasure Moment wrote: better than U2 or rolling stones ever did or beatles for that matter.


You finally got a certain amount of good feedback and you start to say this?!

You're really unbelievable.


it wasnt me who posted this in the beginning, my brother and i are very different


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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 15:52 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

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it wasnt me who posted this in the beginning, my brother and i are very different


Yes, your brother is not that much of an asshole like you, hehe :).

The song is quite good. I enjoyed it a lot. Not too keen on the vocals still but the song is nice. I could see it in an edited version on MTV, sung by Evanescence or someone like that.

Have you considered having a female lead vocalist? or at least someone that can actually sing very good. Your voices are good for demos but not enough for a commercial record, I think.

Wiley

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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 16:08 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I just wrote a new instrumental which would blow those guys off the planet.

And I can sing better than them!

LoL


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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 17:05 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Wiley wrote:

Treasure Moment wrote:


it wasnt me who posted this in the beginning, my brother and i are very different


Yes, your brother is not that much of an asshole like you, hehe :).

The song is quite good. I enjoyed it a lot. Not too keen on the vocals still but the song is nice. I could see it in an edited version on MTV, sung by Evanescence or someone like that.

Have you considered having a female lead vocalist? or at least someone that can actually sing very good. Your voices are good for demos but not enough for a commercial record, I think.

Wiley


evenascenece...what a boring talentless band lol, nah we wont have a female vocalist, our vocalist has a good voice, he just needs some training thats all, our band is pretty new so we are still improving.


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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 17:17 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

.*.Messenger: Jake Pyndle.*. wrote:

I just wrote a new instrumental which would blow those guys off the planet.

And I can sing better than them!

LoL


alright, let me listen to it.


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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 19:30 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I must admit that this is certainly one of your better demos! Great atmosphere to it, yet as I've said in previous posts it would be nice to hear you guys go for something different. The concept of the song is dark and depressing, so I kind of like that! As for the vocals that will come in time. You guys are still improving so don't give up. Congratulations on a good demo! Now, how about that finished recording? I'm looking forward to it.

For future reference and respect to your fellow Queenzoners you should post these threads in the personal section.


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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 21:35 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Treasure Moment wrote:

.*.Messenger: Jake Pyndle.*. wrote:

I just wrote a new instrumental which would blow those guys off the planet.

And I can sing better than them!

LoL


alright, let me listen to it.


I'll sell you my album for $14.99 (has 16 tracks)...


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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 21:43 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<font color=FF9900>Mr Mercury</font> wrote:

The singing on this demo is rubbish to be honest, which is a pity because the song itself sounded like a good idea.

Maybe you should look at getting in someone who can sing to do your stuff justice.




Ya im not a real singer, im just the writer/piano guy. I just recorded the vocals real quick without puttin much effort to make it sound good and its not compressed. But im not the singer so hopefully it will get better with our singer on it.

But its great that some of you guys like the song!

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Posted: 16 Sep 07, 21:57 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Wiley wrote:

Treasure Moment wrote:


it wasnt me who posted this in the beginning, my brother and i are very different


Yes, your brother is not that much of an asshole like you, hehe :).

The song is quite good. I enjoyed it a lot. Not too keen on the vocals still but the song is nice. I could see it in an edited version on MTV, sung by Evanescence or someone like that.

Have you considered having a female lead vocalist? or at least someone that can actually sing very good. Your voices are good for demos but not enough for a commercial record, I think.

Wiley


I wouldnt want to edit the song , i think its good the way it is. Even if it was edited , i wouldnt think MTV would play this kind of deep depressing music. ( they did 80s-mid 90s) But now its all about shallow tunes that last 3.30 min.

Its part of making everyone become less emotional and more robotic.

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Posted: 17 Sep 07, 01:17 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I liked it. Nice job