In the main, I like this, but there's just a couple of bits that don't work for me.
If you can produce another version that keeps the underlying guitar bits in at 1.53, that might keep "it going" rather than sound dropping out to nought but drums, bass & vocs. (says me!)
Can you do something about the glitch at 0.39 when the main guitar comes in - it sounds like someone just plugged Brian in part way.
Never liked the cash machine sound when it was added to the Al Murray show - does the track work without this?
Finally. Can you replace the lead vocals with Roger's, or do you not have access to the demo?