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Posted: 08 Jul 10, 12:46 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I have made some songs lately.  And it would nice to hear some thoughts from you on the forum.  I am fine with constructive criticism :)

And if someone can help me with drum or bass be in touch ;) 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QL_hx8mYOBE


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Posted: 08 Jul 10, 12:50 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I didnt manage to make that link work, so you need to copy it and paste it in the browser. Unless someone can fix it for me.


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Posted: 09 Jul 10, 09:54 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Heres a working link for you -

http://www.youtube.com/watch?gl=GB&v=QL_hx8mYOBE

For the most part I thought it was actually ok. The harmony's near the end sounded a bit "Queen-esque", well Queen 2 era at least to me. The sound itself could do with a bit more fleshing out and , as you have probably already realised yourself, backed up with a bit of bass and drums.

Good effort imo...


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Posted: 09 Jul 10, 16:41 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

It feels kind of Beatles-y to me. I dig it!


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Posted: 09 Jul 10, 16:54 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

DanCorson wrote: It feels kind of Beatles-y to me. I dig it!
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You know what it triggered for me?  Very early Pink Floyd/Syd Barrett.  Especially Barrett.

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Posted: 09 Jul 10, 17:11 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

"Mr Mercury wrote: Heres a working link for you -

http://www.youtube.com/watch?gl=GB&v=QL_hx8mYOBE

For the most part I thought it was actually ok. The harmony's near the end sounded a bit "Queen-esque", well Queen 2 era at least to me. The sound itself could do with a bit more fleshing out and , as you have probably already realised yourself, backed up with a bit of bass and drums.

 Good effort imo..."  

Thanks for the nice feedback. And yes. I do agree with you that a lot lacks in there. I am quite limitied when it comes to play instruments so thats why drums and bass lack atm. I can play guitar and a little piano. So I am now getting some help from a kind person from the queenforum. :)

And thanks for linking for me :)


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Posted: 09 Jul 10, 17:15 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

DanCorson wrote: It feels kind of Beatles-y to me. I dig it!

Oh wait. I am not in that league. But I take it as a compliment. :)


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Posted: 02 Aug 10, 08:30 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Weeman from the forum has added drums and bass now. He is very good and has lifted the song to heights I couldn't have achieved without him ;)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hN2Q3XYAVy4


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