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Posted: 25 Jan 04, 16:26 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I've been in a fairly sentimental mood lately which has given me a spark of 'creativity' as it were. So, Here is one of the products of that 'creativity'. the name is "Here I Am". ENJOY! :D

Here I am,
in my lonely room,
watching the time go by.
Feeling sore and empty,
and only you know why.

If I tell you that I love you,
Will you say the same?
Will you tell me that you need me,
or just forget my name?

I know deep in my heart,
that we were meant to be,
A match made in heaven,
far as I can see.

So, Here I am,
once again,
I'm bearing my heart to you.
I hope to God you hear me,
though I feel like a fool.

I need you by my side,
and I hope you feel the same.
You're the only one can save me,
and break these walls of shame.

I need you in my life,
and I am not ashamed.
You're the only one can save me,
and take away my pain.

Inside my heart I know,
that we were meant to be.
Will you be my heaven,
my eternity?


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Posted: 25 Jan 04, 16:28 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

that's one fine poem :)


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Posted: 25 Jan 04, 16:29 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Thank you.:p


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Posted: 25 Jan 04, 16:35 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

aww bought a tear to my eye Dan, great stuff :)


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Posted: 25 Jan 04, 16:37 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Sweet

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Posted: 25 Jan 04, 16:41 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Thanks all! I'm glad that you like it! :D


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Posted: 25 Jan 04, 16:54 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

great artist, poems is there no end to your talent Dan :) What about putting that on your website too :)


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Posted: 25 Jan 04, 17:00 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Hmmm... Maybe so!


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Posted: 27 Jan 04, 07:04 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

great poem remindes me of wot im goin through at the mo, you shine like a star cause that's who you are!



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Posted: 27 Jan 04, 12:05 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

great poem Danno!


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Posted: 27 Jan 04, 13:02 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

that's really good!


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Posted: 27 Jan 04, 18:23 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Wow Dan, very heartfelt. :)
I'm very impressed :)


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Posted: 27 Jan 04, 18:26 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Thanks all! :D


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Posted: 27 Jan 04, 18:31 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

reminds me of the Beach Boys song in my room


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Posted: 29 Jan 04, 16:56 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I'll take that as a compliment! That's my favorite Beach Boys song! :D


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Posted: 29 Jan 04, 16:58 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

that`s a beautiful poem Dan!


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Posted: 29 Jan 04, 18:23 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

That is very good stuff Dan! :) I liked it a lot.


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Posted: 29 Jan 04, 19:15 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Dan....I love it...just lovely. :-)


(I might even overlook the fact that you couldn't draw a circle to save my life...;-D)


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Posted: 29 Jan 04, 23:25 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

ROTFLOL!!! Thank you very much Janet! I swear to you, I WILL practice those cicles! I'm glad that you'll overlook them for now though. :P


"Elton John and I became really good friends. I don't mean 'good friends' in that sense. I just mean we slept together." -Billy Joel