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Posted: 29 Jan 04, 18:25 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Please tell your all's thoughts on this, I know it's short but please? *pouts lip* :P hehe

I want to go back to my dreams because when I’m there, I feel more at ease. It’s in these dreams, that I usually find more happiness, peace, and love. It’s here that I want to stay for a bit longer than I have been lately. One glance either from or at you is enough to make my legs too weak for me to stand on. I yearn to be held in your strong embrace. I can achieve this by shutting my eyes and letting myself ingress into the dreamland that I covet.
While in this marvelous environment, you welcome me and clasp me in your arms. My lips graze yours in a sudden, unplanned occurrence; however you welcome me, and return the graze. As our kiss deepens, four hands begin to roam. Mine comb through your hair that’s a wonderful mixture of sandy blonde and a light tan as your hands travel along my back. Softly massaging it, you inch closer to my hair. You brush it slightly and although no one can see them, thoughts of jubilation fill our minds and hearts. Soon, we pull away and look into each other’s eyes with adoration.
“Te amo,” you tell me.
I smile and reply, “Te amo.”
We then walk to a couch to talk, connecting on various levels, laughing about jokes that only we understand. This is how it should be, perfect contentment. This is the place I want to stay; I want to stay in my dreams, because in my dreams we are together.


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Posted: 29 Jan 04, 19:14 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

CatGurl, you must live in the same parallel universe as me.

Oh and "Te amo" to you!!


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Posted: 29 Jan 04, 19:50 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

i love the description!!! wow... its good!


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Posted: 29 Jan 04, 21:58 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Sweet, Savannah.

yeah she is :)


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Posted: 29 Jan 04, 22:31 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

*blush blush* Thank you all and *cough* keep the niceness going *cough* :P hehe
and that was a great comment NOBY


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Posted: 29 Jan 04, 23:29 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Very nice! Bravo! :D


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Posted: 30 Jan 04, 03:20 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

It's about me isn't it?

But my hair ain't tan!


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Posted: 30 Jan 04, 05:43 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Sweet :D


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Posted: 30 Jan 04, 11:36 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Wow, Savannah. You've described mostly how I feel these days.

And yes, you're sweet. :-)




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Posted: 01 Feb 04, 10:29 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Wow that's good! I tryed to write someting liike that at Xmas or so and it just wouldn't come out! THat's really great!


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Posted: 01 Feb 04, 16:32 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

very sweet, sheer poetry

but

please don't hate me Catgurl!--> if you mean to say "I love you" in italian the correct form is "Ti Amo"....was this your intention?

i hope my note wasn't felt like an unpleasant criticism!
i would never write such a good texte with my poor english... :)



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Posted: 01 Feb 04, 17:44 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Right, Hitman, TI AMO!

Ehrmmm... no, wait... don't look at me that way!


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Posted: 01 Feb 04, 19:13 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

nice

but it's supposed to be in Spanish, she's telling a Mexican guy


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Posted: 01 Feb 04, 19:58 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Thank you all for what you have said. :)
And okay, the "te amo" part is indeed Spanish, but the guy that is in the writing isn't Spanish, Italian or whatever, he's a guy at my school who probably has mainly European relatives, it's just we both have had Spanish classes at school and he is very smart and in that 'dream world' he says I Love You in a way that's special only for us.
There that's cleared up, continue the rave reviews! ;) lol jk I'm not that vain.


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Posted: 02 Feb 04, 13:26 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

go hot european guys! (especially macedonians!) ;-)


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Posted: 02 Feb 04, 13:35 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

it's about a Mexican vato, she doesn't wanna say though :)


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Posted: 02 Feb 04, 16:00 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

That was beautiful Cat :)


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