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Posted: 23 Feb 04, 09:30 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

HOW FAST FOREVER GOES

We had it all, the sun, the moon the rain
Went thru together from joy and the pain
You promised me that we will stay together
Stay as one soul to eternity, forever…

Winds came and broke us both in tears
Winds came and took you down to sea
Is this the forever you promised to me?
Forever in dreams together we’ll be

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And now I know there is no forever
And I believe not in everlasting dreams
I hold you deep in my heart safe forever
Until time finally set your soul free
Until the last wind finally blows
Only you and I know how fast forever goes

You may watch me when I lay down to sleep
You may kiss my eyes when I can’t see
And one day when it’s time to come to you
You will hold me in your arms and forever comes true

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Yes only you and I know how fast forever goes

There are no birds in my sky (forever)
There is no rainbow in my eyes (forever)
There is no love in my life
Since forever has just passed by… Oh…

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it's my newest work. What u think? Are there any grammar mistakes? If u find any, then please, let me know :)



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Posted: 23 Feb 04, 10:18 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

yo this is all good, I like it very much but yo my Friend if this song is so dear to you, I advice you to be careful ya!
cos... well I dont know how deeply you keep your songs or poems is to you, if you like to rather throw it in da wind so it flies and might land in peoples heads.

But hey this post brought me all the way back to my Cyber nighmare where I foolishly shared a song I made and so so so proud of and some hotshot of a guy literally stole it word by word, and put it into a dance song and played it to must be thousands of people now!! and claiming it to be all his work!!

yo dat guy is nature and any one can do it to these naked lyrics so be careful!

I still didnt managed to see how he can be such a stupid guy!!


too much sweetness is starting to turn

on all of us

Jab and Tranquilize the sour vibe.

so the taste of the bitter pills be our discipline once again

(Shaggy)

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Posted: 23 Feb 04, 10:23 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Hey Gerli!!Congratulations...i wish i could write such great lines like you!


Anything too stupid to be said... is sung.
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Posted: 23 Feb 04, 11:39 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

wow great Lyrics Gerli :D


"I'm going up Buchanan Street

With a box of fireworks

And two bottles of

Tizer"