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Posted: 02 Mar 04, 23:15 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

She Devil

oooh, your a she devil
with your black eyeliner, long straight hair, and that evil, get back stare

you wear your whore tight clothes, high heels of death, your just death on two legs you she devil

why so evil she divil, you so evil that
that devil spit you right back out there she devil

you were born straight out of hell, and since then i can tell what your all about

you lovem' and you leav em' instill trust and then decieve em' ooooh your so cold for a she devil

You put the itch in bitch, one word from your mouth and i wanna smack you she devil. you just look at me with that sass and all i can say is "kiss my ass!"

she Devil, you make me cringe, ooh you make me scream. and so it seems that all you do is haunt me in my dreams.

what do you think? I dont actually know a she devil, bt i felt like being mean. lol


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Posted: 02 Mar 04, 23:51 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

It's well-written for the most part except for the typos. Very entertaining... hilariously bad at times, but certainly worthy of being read at least once. :)

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Posted: 03 Mar 04, 00:13 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Sounds a lot like the women in my life.

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Posted: 07 Mar 04, 03:24 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

its not published, its just a poem i have written for the hell of it. Im just 13 so i dont think that they could really punnish majorly for that. how about this,

Thank you to

Queen for their song "deaht on two legs" wich is my inspiration

and thank you to all the bands that have created those cliches that are beyond my knowlege.


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Posted: 07 Mar 04, 03:24 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

its not published, its just a poem i have written for the hell of it. Im just 13 so i dont think that they could really punnish majorly for that. how about this,

Thank you to

Queen for their song "deaht on two legs" wich is my inspiration

and thank you to all the bands that have created those cliches that are beyond my knowlege.


QUEEN'S MY BAND, AND FREDDIES MY MAN!

along with roger

I often watch the old videos because of their pants.
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Posted: 07 Mar 04, 05:00 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

DAMMIT!!!!!!!! i keep on pressing hte back button so it sends it twice


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Posted: 08 Mar 04, 05:19 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I have read better texts of professionalists and a lot of worser texts in school... This is a "neutral" one.


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Posted: 12 Mar 04, 09:51 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

thank you


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Posted: 12 Mar 04, 19:53 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

now that i look back, it does kinda suck



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I often watch the old videos because of their pants.