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Posted: 21 Apr 04, 04:45 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Yet another of my poems.


My Fate (Tell The World...)

By: D. Corson

There it is
The morning sun
Here I am
Increasingly numb
Tell the world to go away
I'm going out for a spell
Tell them not to bug me now
Tell them to go to hell
I'll stay here and brood
My usual mood
For such has been my fate

There it is
The knife in my back
Who is it now?
Who's on the attack?
Tell the world to stay away
That I'm not doing well
Tell them I won't take it now
Tell them to burn in hell
So keep me subdued
I'm just in a mood
As such has been my fate

Here I stay
I'll be here alone
I won't read my mail
Won't answer the phone
Tell the world I'm out today
And that I'm doing well
And that's why I'll be laughing
When I see them in hell
"Why be so crude?"
"Why are you so rude?"
Because such has been my fate

So here they come
One by one
And there I go
Into the sun
Tell them that I've gone away
And that I wish them well
They know that we'll meet again
When I see them in hell
So I'll come unglued
Keep my bad attitude
Because such has been my fate


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Posted: 21 Apr 04, 13:12 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Well, I've heard cheerier ditties, but it ain't bad.
Bit too much of the rude, crude and unglued for my taste.


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Posted: 21 Apr 04, 17:05 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Yoo could have had dude as well.


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Posted: 21 Apr 04, 17:11 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I liked it. For me it became too much "hell", but otherwise I liked it alot. :-)




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Posted: 21 Apr 04, 17:35 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

... prude...


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Posted: 21 Apr 04, 17:44 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Lewd...


...Erica*



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Posted: 21 Apr 04, 18:12 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Sued...


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Posted: 21 Apr 04, 18:27 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

cued...


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Posted: 21 Apr 04, 18:29 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

... delude...


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Posted: 21 Apr 04, 18:30 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

...booed...


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Posted: 21 Apr 04, 19:05 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

OKay... I get it... *huff*


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Posted: 21 Apr 04, 20:13 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I thought it was very good Dan! :) quite thought provoking as well


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Posted: 21 Apr 04, 20:29 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Thanks! :D


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Posted: 22 Apr 04, 02:49 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Dan, little piece of advice...try ending with orange next time.

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Posted: 22 Apr 04, 04:10 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Orange, orange, orange... Man, I could really go for an orange... :p


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Posted: 22 Apr 04, 10:00 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

You win this time Corson..next time!


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Posted: 22 Apr 04, 15:15 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

;D


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Posted: 22 Apr 04, 20:30 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Thank you!


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Posted: 24 Apr 04, 06:38 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Afret reading, re-reading, and re-reading this some more, I have decided to break out my keyboard and turn this from a poem into a good old fashioned blues song. I think this may work... If I can find some talent...


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Posted: 24 Apr 04, 20:16 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

...cooed...


Nancy Astor : "If I were your wife I would put poison in your coffee".

Winston Churchill : "And if I were your husband I would drink it".