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Posted: 09 Jun 04, 06:35 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Hi-hi Qz! I have some new poetry that I would like to share with you (Hmmm... That sounds like something I've already said...)! I hope you enjoy it! Happy reading!


Serenity

By: D. Corson

A flood of emotion,
A spark of new life.
A frame of consciousness,
Unlike any before,
Will take you by surprise,
To Heaven and beyond.
And a shimmering light,
All through the night,
A glow of obsessions past,
That matter no more,
Will open wide your eyes,
And never break the bond.
A realization,
Of dreams gone by,
Erases the loneliness,
And pain is no more,
As you break through the guise,
To Heaven and beyond.
Deep frustration,
The need to fight,
Anger and sadness,
These things are no more,
When you look into his eyes,
When you look into the face of God.



A Simple Composition

By: D. Corson

If a simple composition,
Could rid the world of hate,
Who would be the one to write it,
And save us from this state?

Would it end all the fighting?
Would it kill all the pain?
Would it stop all the killing?
Would only peace remain?

And who would ask the question,
To help us change our fate?
Would someone try to fight it,
To make us lose or faith?

To purge the world of suffering,
Would only be our gain,
If just one piece of writing,
Could end these endless days.

If a simple composition,
Could give us a clean slate,
Now would be the time to write it,
Before it's far too late...



The Master Of Illusion

By: D. Corson

Out on the stage,
Under the lights,
His adrenaline pumping,
Night after night.

The World is his oyster,
The music his life,
But when the curtain falls,
A sad reality calls,
Back to the show called life.

He wonders through the world,
Winning accolades and fame,
As he hides behind his fortune,
Never showing his true name.
The person on the outside,
Exists to mask his shame,
He's the master of illusion,
And his life is just a game.

Drowning his pity,
Hiding from sight,
He knows he is slipping,
And losing his fight.

The world was his oyster,
The music his life,
But now the curtain falls,
And the big finish calls,
Ending the show called life.


"Elton John and I became really good friends. I don't mean 'good friends' in that sense. I just mean we slept together." -Billy Joel
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Posted: 09 Jun 04, 06:54 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

***fUCKIN HELL SHIT MAN GEEZ!!!***

Sorry bout the colours in ma words bro but hey this is what I usually say when I here a fuckin good poem!!! ooops said it again! soory peeps!

hey brother let ya heart flow man with these words, I think every poet is an undiscovered prophet, this rocks love it!!!

man am goin to dig out som of ma stuff and see what you think but this man....

MAKE IT INTO A SONG DAN!

LOVE IT MAN!



too much sweetness is starting to turn

on all of us

Jab and Tranquilize the sour vibe.

so the taste of the bitter pills be our discipline once again

(Shaggy)

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Posted: 09 Jun 04, 06:57 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

sorry dan I read it again and its beautiful man!!
yo this is the highlight of the day bro for me!
absolute lush

(hang on still lookin for some mine)


too much sweetness is starting to turn

on all of us

Jab and Tranquilize the sour vibe.

so the taste of the bitter pills be our discipline once again

(Shaggy)

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Posted: 09 Jun 04, 09:20 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

*steals poems, makes them into record breakingly good song, becomes billionaire then loses it all on eating Faberge eggs*

I like 'em.


...this kettle is boiling over...

...one dump...one turd...two tits...John Deacon...

...one prawn...one shrimp...one clam...one chicken!
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Posted: 09 Jun 04, 09:26 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

LOL IGSM!!
Ya man so so so true innocent Dan if a poem is so rawly made from you, and its good enought to be your sacred words, dont fall into the sell out trap of exposing it too much lol! I once fell with that by exposing my song in the net and some rich fuck stole it!! GGRRR!!!!


too much sweetness is starting to turn

on all of us

Jab and Tranquilize the sour vibe.

so the taste of the bitter pills be our discipline once again

(Shaggy)

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Posted: 09 Jun 04, 09:28 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Ooh! Faberge eggs!!!

*Oh yeah! Thanks guys! :D*


"Elton John and I became really good friends. I don't mean 'good friends' in that sense. I just mean we slept together." -Billy Joel
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Posted: 09 Jun 04, 10:19 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Azmandaman wrote:


Ya man so so so true innocent Dan if a poem is so rawly made from you, and its good enought to be your sacred words, dont fall into the sell out trap of exposing it too much lol! I once fell with that by exposing my song in the net and some rich fuck stole it!! GGRRR!!!!
Don't worry, I have that covered.


"Elton John and I became really good friends. I don't mean 'good friends' in that sense. I just mean we slept together." -Billy Joel
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Posted: 09 Jun 04, 10:45 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Really great Dan!


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Posted: 09 Jun 04, 11:20 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

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How so, old bean? Lasers?


...this kettle is boiling over...

...one dump...one turd...two tits...John Deacon...

...one prawn...one shrimp...one clam...one chicken!
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Posted: 09 Jun 04, 11:24 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Good for you DanDaMan..... once again bro its beatiful man!! yo if I read the last poem to ma self again bro ya gonna make a homeboy cry hehe!!!

so freakin true man!! much respect for letting it out so pure like that about the Great candle that is Freddie, shame the flame is gone leaving only a cold reality without him

Queen members still pretending in lighting the candle to this new age,
but its another crowd, another time,
today is just another show.
when Mercury was alive is when Queen truly shine.




too much sweetness is starting to turn

on all of us

Jab and Tranquilize the sour vibe.

so the taste of the bitter pills be our discipline once again

(Shaggy)