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Posted: 20 Jun 05, 22:54 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

In a little place called Queenzone,
Members such as ThomasQuinn run wild,
We've tried calling their mother using a phone,
Sadly, it doesn't work, so Arlene ate his child,

Ok, that one was bad, just 'warmin' up' :D.

Queenzone is a scary place,
People have to use mace,
No matter how hard they try,
They always end up having to cry,

Many of the members,
Were not born in December,
Some were,
Some wern't,

KillerKing thought he was better than _Amadeus_,
But KillerQueen liked _Amadeus_ more,
Jessica likes people who are famous,
Unlike KillerKing, who is an ugly boar,

BPP is a misunderstood genius,
Such as a deranged fetus,
Arlene is unfortunetly annoying,
She spends all her time moaping,

Serry's a good enough member,
One of the best at Queenzone,
It's not saying much, remember,
When Forever spams alone,

_Amadeus_ is a handsome prince,
Everyone adore,
Look at the time, it's half past six,
Everyone wants more,

Srg. Pep makes her intentions clear,
It seems she is drinking beer,
As the days go by,
People doubt that Tea is a guy,

Jingle rules his land with his parrot,
Which looks oddly like a ferret,
The Lord of Darkness frightens all,
He actually likes to play with dolls,

Hard_Rocker rocks hard,
No, I'm not reading off a card,
Sonia is as odd as odd can be,
Singing merrily as can be,

The post called Mahler is well-known,
For all the wrong reasons,
Michael Jacksons, AKA Mahler, looks like a clown,
He was arrested for treason,

Erin is a normal member,
Which is hard to say about most people on here,
She wasn't born in November,
Many of the Queenzone members drink beer,

Marial is a drunken buzzard,
Ok, I'm joking, she kinda looks like a lizzard,
Gunpowder is a great member,
One that makes sense, even in December,

You have just finished reading a finish poem,
I hope you have enjoyed it, now buy a comb,
_Amadeus_ is a great person, the best as can be,
Now, please take your time, and compliment me,

THANK YOU, THANK YOU!




Nobody is always a winner, and anybody who says he is, is either a liar or doesn't play poker.
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Posted: 20 Jun 05, 22:57 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

_amadeus_ wrote:

Srg. Pep makes his intentions clear,
It seems he is drinking beer


I'm a girl.


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Posted: 20 Jun 05, 23:00 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Fixed :D


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Posted: 20 Jun 05, 23:01 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

So is Arlene. How is Arlene a guy's name?

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Posted: 20 Jun 05, 23:03 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

U guys r picky :D


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Posted: 20 Jun 05, 23:35 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

How do you know we've never met?


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Posted: 21 Jun 05, 00:50 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

body language ha ha wrote:

_amadeus_ wrote:

How do you know we've never met?


I am a fucking genious and she's my cousin.


Genius* ;)




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Posted: 21 Jun 05, 02:43 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Are you so starved for attention that you don't care that it be negative attention? If not, do not read the following. Might hurt the little prince's ego.

You are so arrogant. I can't believe you have the audacity to write such a rude poem. Get a more constructive hobby, please.

_amadeus_ wrote:

Erin is a normal member,
Which is hard to say about most people on here


Erin is quite a nice lady, but normal is a matter of perception.

_amadeus_ wrote:

No matter how hard they try,
They always end up having to cry


If that is true for you, perhaps you are not mature enough to be here.


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Posted: 21 Jun 05, 02:49 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

You bastard, you missed out the great and glorious DarkQueen (or DirtQueen - whichever you lot know me better as...)!! Very disappointing - your poem is shite!! :P

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Posted: 21 Jun 05, 03:07 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

_amadeus_ wrote:



Sonia is as odd as odd can be,
Singing merrily as can be,



I hope you mean this is a good way... Otherwise you're dead, dude... or are you a gal... It's so confusing. :D


I got to try al little more,

because I'm an asshole but I'm learning.



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Posted: 21 Jun 05, 03:45 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

The Mir@cle wrote:

_amadeus_ wrote:



Sonia is as odd as odd can be,
Singing merrily as can be,



I hope you mean this is a good way... Otherwise you're dead, dude... or are you a gal... It's so confusing. :D

yiiiiiii! thanx sweetie! ;)
But... what do u mean by or are you a gal?:P


2+2=5
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Posted: 21 Jun 05, 03:57 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I was just kidd'n... he called Sergeant and Arlene guys...


I got to try al little more,

because I'm an asshole but I'm learning.



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Posted: 21 Jun 05, 05:17 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

body language ha ha wrote:

Dude, do you have a crush on KillerQueen? How can you have a crush on a girl you never fucking met?


Been there, done that - it's not as hard as you may think really...

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Posted: 21 Jun 05, 06:53 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<b><font color = "crimson">ThomasQuinn wrote:

_Amadeus_: I don't wish to be a bastard or anything, but I think you might be better off if you stick to music. I mean, if you use rhyme, that's ok, even though it's not usually employed by the great poets, save those of the 18th/19th century, but if you do, you should use it correctly and have a certain structure about it.

Furthermore, you should really mind your rhythm. If there's one thing that ruins this thing, it's the rhythm, which is absolutely apalling. It's like playing Debussey's 'Clair De Lune' (which I'm sure you played; please don't confuse this classical work with the simple nursery-rhyme-like 'Au Clair De La Lune') with a flagrant disregard for the time-signature, playing the notes at random lengths and having bars of random length.


Abridged version: It's crap.


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Posted: 21 Jun 05, 07:06 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

sorry dude, it sucks!


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Posted: 21 Jun 05, 07:26 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Bob The Shrek wrote:

<b><font color = "crimson">ThomasQuinn wrote:

_Amadeus_: I don't wish to be a bastard or anything, but I think you might be better off if you stick to music. I mean, if you use rhyme, that's ok, even though it's not usually employed by the great poets, save those of the 18th/19th century, but if you do, you should use it correctly and have a certain structure about it.

Furthermore, you should really mind your rhythm. If there's one thing that ruins this thing, it's the rhythm, which is absolutely apalling. It's like playing Debussey's 'Clair De Lune' (which I'm sure you played; please don't confuse this classical work with the simple nursery-rhyme-like 'Au Clair De La Lune') with a flagrant disregard for the time-signature, playing the notes at random lengths and having bars of random length.


Abridged version: It's crap.

LMAO
Radi edit: Crap

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Posted: 21 Jun 05, 09:16 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Thank you for mention my name in your poem!

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Posted: 21 Jun 05, 10:04 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

_amadeus_ wrote:


Erin is a normal member,
Which is hard to say about most people on here,



Hmm..I better start shaking things up a bit then..

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Posted: 21 Jun 05, 11:41 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Erm..this is a little disturbing.


"The walls we build around us to keep sadness out also keep out the joy."

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Posted: 21 Jun 05, 12:17 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Dear amadeus,
please DO NOT go into the greeting card business.
:D