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_amadeus_
Bohemian: 763 posts
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A Child Dies Everyone always turned their back Even when they heard him cry, To the sounds of violence from that shack They closed their ears when they walked by. It's not our problem you could hear them say When the child would ask for help, They just walked away on that day Even when on his chin they saw the welt. Everyone knew just what he did When he got home from that bar. Toys on the floor, a mess on the bed, A little spanking suddenly gone too far. One night the sad cry was silenced. No one had the chance to say goodbye. Maybe if someone could stop the violence No more children would have to die.
Nobody is always a winner, and anybody who says he is, is either a liar or doesn't play poker.
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Victoria
Bohemian: 529 posts
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Fortunately, there aren't any Queenzoners named ''no''.
*honk* *honk* - Harpo
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Mr.Jingles
Deity: 10546 posts
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(lights up a zippo lighter) When the children cry let them know we tried When the children fight let them know it ain't right When the children pray let them know the way Cause when the children sing then the new world begins
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Brandon wrote: [/QUOTENAME]... and now the "best you can offer is Mr. Jingles? HA! He's... just pathetic.[/QUOTE]
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KillerQueen840
Deity: 4081 posts
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When a child dies Rip out his eyes Sell them to strange guys Or bake them into pies To serve with chicken thighs And a platter of French Fries But that may increase your size If you want to be wise Watch out for eye-stealing spies Who will tell a lot of lies And always wear a diguise As soon as you get your supplies You must arise This is all I advise To protect his eyes When the child dies ____ I'm bored..but ya, the syallables don't really stay consistent, but I just felt like seeing how long I could go rhyming. lol
"The walls we build around us to keep sadness out also keep out the joy."
(Jim Rohn)
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Sonia Doris
Deity: 6254 posts
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the_hero wrote: amadeus does it again yu-hu! let's celebrate! zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...
2+2=5
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Erin
Deity: 8445 posts
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Mr.Jingles79 wrote: (lights up a zippo lighter) When the children cry let them know we tried When the children fight let them know it ain't right When the children pray let them know the way Cause when the children sing then the new world begins Oh God..White Lion..*LOL*
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_amadeus_
Bohemian: 763 posts
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Finally, proof that you don't even read the posts... I did NOT make that poem, my dad did, and posted it on here to see what you thought of it. Not one good, or for that matter, 'decent' comment has been made about neither my poorly written poem or the poem that is on this thread.
Nobody is always a winner, and anybody who says he is, is either a liar or doesn't play poker.
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Mr.Jingles
Deity: 10546 posts
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I liked it, that's why I'm still waving my zippo lighter.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Brandon wrote: [/QUOTENAME]... and now the "best you can offer is Mr. Jingles? HA! He's... just pathetic.[/QUOTE]
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Victoria
Bohemian: 529 posts
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I did not read your post because you have lost my respect. Though no one is allowed to envoke your freedom of speech, no one is allowed to envoke my freedom to not listen. I no longer see fit that I should waist my time reading what you, amadeus, have to say. You seem to have the same regard for my posts. And if you'll note, I only responded to what was said by Alex.
*honk* *honk* - Harpo
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_amadeus_
Bohemian: 763 posts
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<font color =#CC00FF>***Marial-B*** wrote: After reading your first poem... why would I care to read another??? And I was answering Vic and Alex's response More proof that you people do NOT read. Marial, please read my previous post.
Nobody is always a winner, and anybody who says he is, is either a liar or doesn't play poker.
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Sonia Doris
Deity: 6254 posts
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Alex Solan wrote: ZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzz... u quoting me without my permission??? aaaaaaargh!!! now u must pay!!! :P
2+2=5
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Sonia Doris
Deity: 6254 posts
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I don't really care about him getting an interesting life, but whatever life NOT ONLINE... that would make a change, wouldn't it?
2+2=5
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The Mir@cle
Deity: 3543 posts
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You've got a little e-mail Sonia... Did you receive my 2nd SMS???
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