I like the idea of the 'winding up' start, but you over egged the pudding a bit, in my opinion. Not quite so much pitch bend, and a volume boost might have sounded better. I like the effect at 1:09, and the second chorus effect isn't bad either (but not as good as the first), but as has been said above, the live / studio transitions just don't work, and the fade out and back in at the end might just as well have been two separate tracks. You did that on your Radio Ga Ga mix, and I strongly suggest dropping the idea.
Your mixes are definitely improving, but maybe you need to take a little more time over them? Don't rush release things for the sake of it. I released 6 mixes in one day, but those were ones I had done over several years!
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