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Posted: 01 Oct 05, 15:48 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Living in her mother's attic was the greatest of mistakes,
For she shares her bed with corpses of the dreams her father breaks.
She wanders through the streets without a shoelace to her shoe,
And she sees a crumpled paper and it makes her think of you.

She's so lonely (just a girl without a clue)
She's wants only (only wants to be with you)
She's the face (in the window of the train)
She's the shadow (that follows in the lane)

She's a little bit misguided but she means well when she does
All those things that make you wonder what that funny feeling was.
But every single morning when the rain comes pouring down
She is waiting in the phone booth, but she doesn't make a sound.

She's so lonely (she's the girl without a name)
She is only (only she is still the same)

Never mind the rags, the tatters of a broken childhood.
Look into the eyes of sadness and behold the hidden good.
She will love you like an angel; she'll protect you like a friend.
She will follow you to death's door and be with to you the end.


Madam, you have between your legs an instrument capable of giving pleasure to thousands and all you can do is scratch it.

-Sir Thomas Beecham to a lady cellist
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Posted: 01 Oct 05, 15:52 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

That's excellent.


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Posted: 01 Oct 05, 15:52 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

omg that is so good ! Seriously.. wish I could write dat good :p


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Posted: 01 Oct 05, 16:05 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Thank you guys. I was listening to Queen when I decided to write that.


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Posted: 01 Oct 05, 16:19 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I really like it. :)


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Posted: 01 Oct 05, 21:31 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

very good!! talented chick:)


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Posted: 02 Oct 05, 05:01 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

excellent....very impressive !

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Posted: 02 Oct 05, 07:01 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Very nice i like it :)


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Posted: 02 Oct 05, 15:26 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Aw thanks Nathan and everyone!


Madam, you have between your legs an instrument capable of giving pleasure to thousands and all you can do is scratch it.

-Sir Thomas Beecham to a lady cellist
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Posted: 02 Oct 05, 16:00 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Queenleaf wrote:

Living in her mother's attic was the greatest of mistakes,
For she shares her bed with corpses of the dreams her father breaks.
She wanders through the streets without a shoelace to her shoe,
And she sees a crumpled paper and it makes her think of you.

She's so lonely (just a girl without a clue)
She's wants only (only wants to be with you)
She's the face (in the window of the train)
She's the shadow (that follows in the lane)

She's a little bit misguided but she means well when she does
All those things that make you wonder what that funny feeling was.
But every single morning when the rain comes pouring down
She is waiting in the phone booth, but she doesn't make a sound.

She's so lonely (she's the girl without a name)
She is only (only she is still the same)

Never mind the rags, the tatters of a broken childhood.
Look into the eyes of sadness and behold the hidden good.
She will love you like an angel; she'll protect you like a friend.
She will follow you to death's door and be with to you the end.


Now you should record it to see if it actually fits. During the recording process, things change.



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Posted: 02 Oct 05, 16:52 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Hehe I don't record. Funny I should say that because I'm going to be recording in about 3 hours but that's stupid church music and I'm playing violin. Songs are just for fun you know?


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Posted: 02 Oct 05, 23:14 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I wish you would get online darling I miss you.


Madam, you have between your legs an instrument capable of giving pleasure to thousands and all you can do is scratch it.

-Sir Thomas Beecham to a lady cellist
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Posted: 02 Oct 05, 23:39 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

très bon