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Posted: 16 Jun 06, 12:46 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

well since no one is posting on the other story thread, i thought i might create another. plus, there were like 29 pages. thats alot. the topic of this thread is the same topic as the others, so boys beware. you may feel unwanted here, unless you are gay and into making stories about romancing with band members. let your imagination run wild!


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Posted: 16 Jun 06, 13:03 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Sweet! I'm still thinking up of a good story! :-)


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Posted: 16 Jun 06, 13:04 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

great!


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Posted: 16 Jun 06, 19:08 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Ok, I think I got one! For now, I'll use me with Brian as my..mmm lets see.. Phys Ed. teacher! *ooohhh I'm liking this already*

K-Kate
B-Brian
J-John *had to add in John since he's left out alot*

It was a bright and sunny day, and Kate was heading to gym class from her band lesson with Mr. Deacon. John had just reminded her that there was Marching band practice after school. All excited, she skipped to Gym class when suddenly she bumped into the gorgeous teacher with big, curly hair and a beautiful smile.

B- "Whoa, you seem a bit excited!"
K-*Stunned* "Yeah, I have marching practice after school. But, I'm ready for Gym Mr. May!!"
B- "Oh, Kate..." *smiles* "You know you can call me Brian."
K- "Oh, OK Brian."
B- "Ok Class, today we're are going to learn the basics of aerobics."

*he pops in Queen's Hot Space album with "Back Chat" on it and starts streching. The class follows. Brian immidiately watches Kate. After class...*

B- "Kate, would you mind if I came to your marching band practice?"
K- "No, not at all. Sweetie!"
B- "What was that??!!"
K- "Oh nothing."

*Brian stopped Kate and gave her a long kiss on the lips.*

B- "See you there!"
K- *about ready to faint* "Ok!"

*At marching band, Kate had out her Trumpet and was ready to go. Mr. Deacon always commented her on always being ready. She loved having Rock stars as teachers. They made their way to the field to work on their halftime show and all the music they played were Queen songs. Brian came, and stood next to John as they watched the kids march*

J- "Nice Job Kate. Good tone!"
B- "Beautiful Sweetie Beautiful!"
J- "Kate, hold up. We need to fix your posture."
K- "Ok, Mr. Deacon!"
J- "Oh for God sakes call me John!!"
K- "OK"

Brian and John made their way to the field. John put his hands on Kate's shoulders and Brian put his hands on her hips.

J- "Ok sweetheart. Stand up streight."
K- "Ok" *gets the hots for her teachers*
B- "That's it!"
J- "How about you and Brian meet me in the Band Room after practice?"
K- "Ok"

*After practice, Kate met both John and Brian in the Band Room. Much to her suprise, John and Brian decorated the immense room very romantically and had a beautiful dinner waiting.*

K-"Wow! I wasn't expecting this!" *Blushing*
B- "Only the best for you, Kate!"
J- *shyly* "Only the best for a beautiful young lady!"

*After dinner, they sat and talked. Soon, one thing led to another and all of a sudden, both Brian and John leaned over and started to kiss Kate, and well the rest is up to your imagination!* Well, I hope you like it. It's not that great but it's a start.



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Posted: 16 Jun 06, 21:39 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

that was a great way to start off the new thread. could you make me a story next. with roger, at movies. please?


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Posted: 16 Jun 06, 22:09 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

im a fool wrote:

that was a great way to start off the new thread. could you make me a story next. with roger, at movies. please?
Ok, What is your name and I'll try to write one up for you


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Posted: 17 Jun 06, 00:18 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

yay! more stories! haha can i have one????

Samantha
Pick a member....
I dont care the scene... surprise me!

lol

I have an idea, lets have everyone j/ say their names up front now so we can always refer back to it when we want stories...
But if ya dont want to, we dont have too..

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Posted: 17 Jun 06, 11:43 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I'm so upset! I had such a good idea for a story, but then I forgot it! D'oh! *slaps self upside the head* I need to remember what it was! Grrrrrrr....!!!


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Posted: 17 Jun 06, 14:57 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

What's up with all this dialogue stuff? It's kind of corny.

And that last Queen story thread wasn't funny at all! Too serious.


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Posted: 17 Jun 06, 15:09 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:

What's up with all this dialogue stuff? It's kind of corny.

And that last Queen story thread wasn't funny at all! Too serious.


It's just a bit of fun, LadyMercury.

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Posted: 17 Jun 06, 15:16 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Queen_Rox<h6>We Will Rock You</h6> wrote:

<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:

What's up with all this dialogue stuff? It's kind of corny.

And that last Queen story thread wasn't funny at all! Too serious.


It's just a bit of fun, LadyMercury.


I see.


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Posted: 18 Jun 06, 23:29 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Hey guys!
I'm back again. Sorry, I was away for the weekend. Went to the Drag Races. My second love behind Queen! Anyways, If anyone wants me to think up of any stories. Just leave your name and any one of our 4 rock star heart throbs of your choice and I will try to think one up!! :-)


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Posted: 19 Jun 06, 19:30 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Ok, Here you go Tessa. Hopefully, you'll like it.
T- Tessa
R-Roger

*On a bright sunny day, Tessa went to the Grocery store to pick up a few things. While she was in the cerial isle, she bumped into this gorgeous man with beautiful long blonde hair*

T- "Oh Dear, I'm so sorry!"
R- "Oh, that's OK. Hey! Wow! You're gorgeous! By the way my name's Roger."
T- "You're not so bad looking yourself. My name's Tessa."

*Just then she realized that he looked familiar.*

T- "Hey, Aren't you that adorable Drummer from Queen?"
R- "Yeah."
T- *thinking* "Oh My God, I just ran into the hottest rock star!"
R- "Hey, do you want to come to my house for dinner tonight? It'll be just the two of us."
T- *starstruck* "Of course Roger. I just have to go home and get changed."
R- *smiles* "I'll pick you up at 7:00. See you then!"

*Tessa ran home and got changed and ready for her hot date with Roger Taylor. It didn't sink in until Roger picked her up right at 7:00. They soon got to Roger's house and had a romantic dinner. Then Roger took her hand."

R- "Follow me."
T- "Ok, where are we going?"
R- *smiles* "You'll see."

*Roger took her upstairs to his room. There he told her that she was welcome to stay the night.*

T- "Wow Roger, you have a gorgeous house."
R- "Yes, but not a gorgeous as you."

*Roger gave her a long, romantic kiss. Soon, one thing led to another and well what happened the rest of that night is between Roger and Tessa.*

Hope you like it! :-)



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Posted: 19 Jun 06, 20:49 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

great stories! keep up the good work.


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Posted: 20 Jun 06, 12:06 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

This 1 is for me :D

N= Nicki B=Brian

Nicki and Brian are both hotel mangers. Nicki is a BIG flirt and little does she know that Brian likes her

N= I hope you enjoy your stay here with us. If you have any problems just ask for Nicki.
B= **after the guests had gone** You look like you are enjoying yourself
Nicki= **nods** yup I'm really enjoying it here, It's soooo lively!

Brian sqeezes past, brushing Nicki's arm.

B= I've got to go
N= Ok, see you later in the staff meeting.

** In the meeting room**

Hotel Owner= Right these are the schdules for the work tonight.
N= I though tonight was my night off!
B= Same!
Hotel Owner= Well it's not! Team dissmissed
N= **to Brian** What are you doing?
B= Guard duty, you know, keeping an eye open upstairs, what about you?
N= Same, I suppose we should do it together, that way we wont get lonely
B= Ok, I'll meet you upstairs

**Upstaris**

N= Right, lets get to work

Brian follows her around, every now and again checking his watch.

B= Time for us to finish
N= Yeah I'm shattered! Did you pick up 2 room keys?
B= **looks embarressed** Erm... well I've only got 1.
N= What room?
B= This 1 ** points to the nearest door**
N= ok

** Inside the room **

N= I'll sleep in here
B= No ** goes bright red ** I get lonely
N= Why didn't you say so!

Nicki grabs Brian's hand and leads him into the bedroom, but what happens?...Thats for my ears only lol


I'm REALLY embarressed!!!


"And still I fear and still I dear not laugh at the mad man" - Brian May



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Posted: 20 Jun 06, 12:26 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:

Queen_Rox<h6>We Will Rock You</h6> wrote:

<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:

What's up with all this dialogue stuff? It's kind of corny.

And that last Queen story thread wasn't funny at all! Too serious.


It's just a bit of fun, LadyMercury.


I see.


Well, I agree with LadyMercury... To much pain and illness :-s...


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Posted: 21 Jun 06, 20:07 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

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THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU, I love my story thanks again, bye-bye!

No problem!! Glad you liked it! :-)


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Posted: 23 Jun 06, 17:51 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:

What's up with all this dialogue stuff? It's kind of corny.

And that last Queen story thread wasn't funny at all! Too serious.

The beginning was good, but the rest sucked.


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Posted: 23 Jun 06, 20:14 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<font color=&#FF0063><b>Cookies! wrote:

<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote:

What's up with all this dialogue stuff? It's kind of corny.

And that last Queen story thread wasn't funny at all! Too serious.

The beginning was good, but the rest sucked.


I'm sorry to be offended, but are you saying that we're not-so-good writers?

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Posted: 23 Jun 06, 20:39 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

(Me and Freddie Mercury dancing in a hot 70s nightclub)

Freddie: woo, yeah, oh ja oh ja, where be the oven mitts, this is too hot for my hands!

Me: are you talking about my arse

Freddie: yessiree fucking bob, i am, owww, that hurt

Me: sorry man, just don't touch...just..just...d-d-don't touch it. keep dancing. yeah, shake it, let me hear you say, vat?

(then we booty dance and rent a hot room at the sunset motel, YEAH)

That was just shit and more shit put into dialogue


I'm so pissed I could spit.