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Posted: 22 Jun 06, 16:08 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

This is for anyone who writes. Poems and short stories! And if you've got any fanfiction sites or whatever with your writing on them, post them here! I'll go first i suppose... i cant believe im doing this... but here ya are.... These are rather uh, well i think cliche and cheesy... but im overly critical of my own work... i hope to one day make these into songs...


--Possible--

Not Impossible to miss
What yet to be had
As powerful a kiss
To that Mystic land

Tis what build our sleep
And enlightens your mind
To mountains so steep
And that touch so kind

Possible to see
Futures so bold
With glimpses of we
Simple love to hold

This always will remain
Like waters reflection
Your hearts memories retain
The Everlasting dreams perfection

Not impossible to miss
Possible realty
An uncomplicated wish
Outside lifes conventionalities

Smile each day
With little regret
Hindering you way

Take this notion
The dreams will live
With your hearts devotion
And It'll be possible
To love and forgive

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Posted: 22 Jun 06, 16:11 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Whooooa! We have a real poet here!! :D


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Posted: 22 Jun 06, 16:17 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

L'histoire de l'oeuf!


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Posted: 22 Jun 06, 18:19 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I like that, I definitely see it working as a song!

Here's one of mine:

The Guitar

I played a guitar today
and held it steady in my grasp,
Its mirrored gaze was smudged by fingertips, each remnant blurring its sheen.
It warmed in my palms, a heaving weight
as its mahogany glimmered beneath fluorescent lights blazing overhead
Polished by decades of play
caressed by steps of similar impatient fingers
The pearled inlays shone as dim stars,
beacons against the ashen fretboard.
Its tuning knobs made me think of nickels,
their glint managing to distract eyes from weathered sidewalks
Each string was fixed taut as a tightrope,
firm at the bridge
but quavering with a thrum as my thumb ghosted low E
Then deliberate, and it reverberated in triumph
I strummed a chord this time
and it rang out cleanly,
texturing backdrops of silent white
Another, lower now, blistering
Each note like a soldier tucked in its web of frets
and poised to desert the tangle to enter into battles proud and faraway
The strings were sandpaper as they imprinted
grooves into the pads of my fingertips
Scraping, until I found comfort in each echo
emerging from the soundhole, its cavernous whale’s belly
Joy leaked from its neck with each graze
and seeped into every crease
separating from my touch to fan outwards
Casting everything with melted,
melted diamonds
As the final note lay down and slept soundlessly.





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Posted: 22 Jun 06, 18:25 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

DreaminQueen, Gunpowder Gelatine and the_hero, those are some really fantastic poems.

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Posted: 22 Jun 06, 18:54 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

oooh I love to write! :) I've written a lot of stuff, but it's all in norwegian so there's no point in posting it here, I guess....

love your songs/poems btw :o) it feels good to write!


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Posted: 22 Jun 06, 19:05 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

wow, you guys are fantastic!

I am truly speechless.
Queen Fans are some of the most talented people I've seen.

Keep them coming!
i'll post another of mine...

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Posted: 22 Jun 06, 19:15 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

--Untitled-- (at the moment)

Hard to remain
When the tinted leaves
Forever change
So still, I wait

The White Queen
Sees her lonely king
Reaching for what shouldve been
So Still, she waits

Falling fast
While it began
Not a shadow cast
So swift, hearts ran

Mine eyes
He shall not see
Perpetual Lies
So Still, I wait

Upon her face
Slightest kiss
Feels soul race
For'ere, She waits

Moonlight shines
In darkest fears
So sad, those eyes
So still, she waits



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Posted: 22 Jun 06, 19:20 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

the_hero wrote:

that;s a nice rework of White Queen :-)


haha, i was listening to it when i wrote it, it j/ sorta happened....
*blushes*
im embarassed now...

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Posted: 22 Jun 06, 19:24 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

the_hero wrote:

You won’t be forgotten

This is a song about the great Freddie Mercury
The one guy that really meant so much to me
The music, the lyrics, his personality
Sometimes makes you snap back to reality

All I want to say is that you won’t be forgotten
You will always be there in our heart
You will always be our number one
Giving us the love that will never part

The energy the power you had in you
The struggle the pain you had to go through
The strength and the love you gave us
The words you said to the media, developed a lot of fuzz

But they don’t understand you, and I think no-one will
You had a lot of sad hearts to fill
But you came through and made everyone smile
With your glamourous and outragious style

So thank you for everything you gave to the whole world
You won’t be forgotten, that’s for sure
Your mystery will never be unfurled
Your music to us is the ultimatie cure

RIP dear friend.

(dedicated to Freddie)


Okay....wow!!!!! Never knew you did this man. Filled tears in my eyes. :-)

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Posted: 22 Jun 06, 21:02 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

YOUR ASS IS LIKE A ROTTEN APPLE
AND YOUR PUSSY SMELLS LIKE DIRTY PUSSY

YOU'RE A BITCH AND I HATE YOU


Dedicated to my ex girlfriend

=)


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Posted: 22 Jun 06, 21:58 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Lovely Matias... :P

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Posted: 22 Jun 06, 21:59 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

OMG!! You guys write such nice poetry!! I like having all these artsy threads :)

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Posted: 23 Jun 06, 04:57 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Writers ROCKS! :D.. You keep up doing it! :D


O_o
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Posted: 23 Jun 06, 15:06 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

You guys are talented writers!

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Posted: 23 Jun 06, 16:13 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<font color=red>Quonkers wrote:

I did the Write A Book competition in 2004 and won, but I haven't written a story since.

Whoa, that's awesome! Great job! :D :D


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Posted: 23 Jun 06, 16:57 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<font color=blue><b>M a t i a s M a y wrote:

YOUR ASS IS LIKE A ROTTEN APPLE
AND YOUR PUSSY SMELLS LIKE DIRTY PUSSY

YOU'RE A BITCH AND I HATE YOU


Dedicated to my ex girlfriend

=)


LMAO! xD xD xD



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Posted: 23 Jun 06, 18:48 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

the_hero wrote:

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Posted: 23 Jun 06, 18:49 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I wish I could write poetry but it all comes out like a Primus song...


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Posted: 23 Jun 06, 18:50 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

HEY FAT MAN
YOU'RE DONE
FUCK OFF
KISS MY ASS


dedicated to my dad


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