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Posted: 07 Jul 06, 07:52 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote


Chapter one.

It was an early morning.. A young lad named John was walking down the empty streets, in Kensington. It. He was a student, in the very early seventies, atempting to become an electrician, and maybe get his own store someday.. He was actually thinking about that whilst this was written, and smiled at the thought.. He was walking around in his own little Deaky world, thinking about Parralelconections and other fun stuff, wich caused him not to notice the streetlamp in front of him.. The result? A big headache, and a dirty sweater.. He literally bit the dust.
”Watch were you´re going you big bully!!, wait til my mumma hears about this, then- then,.then….!!!”
He becaem quiet, knowing how silly that had soundet. He looked up, begging hat it was´nt a scinhead.. He smiled when he saw what it was.
”Alright, then I´ll spear your life for this time.. But make sure it does´nt happen again!”
He pulled himsef up from the dirty ground, leaning against the cold metal for a while. He was dizzy as hell, and for a few seconds, he could´nt remember what his name was.
”Stupid idiots, placing streetlight of metal right here where I´m supposed to walk! When I become the best electrician in the world, I swear I´ll invent a streetlight made of rubber! Then all the alcoholics, and daydreamers will make me their king!”
He shok his head and started walking again.

Chapter 2.
Somehow John managed to get to baker´s shop, bying himself a donut, and then go home, without any other acidents.
”Wow, that was sure SOMETHING!” John thought, whilst watching this mornings episdode of Tom and Jerry. The Donut, he had eaten in one mouthfull, on his way home.
He went to his bedroom to find some clothes, and then go to school.
”I wanna be sexy today… Ah here we go!”
He found his new pair of jeans, and his good old hawai shirt. He brushed his hair, wich was a pleasure today, since he had used conditioner in his hair for a change. He turned around looking at himself, and specialy his ass.
”Still stight, huh?” He said, throwing one hell of a charming smile after himself.
”Oh yes it is.. But dont worry. You can get medication to ease constipation these days.. Modern time´s rocks, huh?” Said a rhaspy voice behind him.
Johns sexy smile fadet.. He was about to get VERY tired of his roommate, Eliot. He always walked in om him doing private stuff.
”Very funny, now if you dont mind, I have (unlike certain other peoples) an aducation to take care of..!”
And with those words, John graped his baseballcap, and left the flat, with a very insulted expresion on his face..



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Posted: 07 Jul 06, 07:52 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Well... I hope you´re going to like it :s


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Posted: 07 Jul 06, 08:05 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

^Oh yeah, sorry about that :s.. I´m such a lazy student xD



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Posted: 07 Jul 06, 08:09 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Wow, a fantastic story FreMeat! I look forward to reading the next chapter.

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Posted: 07 Jul 06, 08:11 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

What is wrong with you people?

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Posted: 07 Jul 06, 12:44 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Thanks :D..


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Posted: 07 Jul 06, 12:54 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Do you people actually have an IQ level?

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Posted: 07 Jul 06, 13:01 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

What are you talking about, Pieter??!! That story like TOTALLY RAWKED!!!

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Posted: 07 Jul 06, 14:07 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Save your sarcasm please, I´m already anoyed at myself, because I found some of the mistakes :S..^


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Posted: 07 Jul 06, 18:45 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

That was confusing. I know I'm the author of one of the many stupid Queen stories, but I'm not like that anymore and all these stories are getting old.


I'm so pissed I could spit.
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Posted: 08 Jul 06, 04:47 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<font color=>LadyMercury wrote:

That was confusing. I know I'm the author of one of the many stupid Queen stories, but I'm not like that anymore and all these stories are getting old.




Whoa...Blank stare at the screen


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Posted: 08 Jul 06, 04:49 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Cute story Freme!!!


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Posted: 08 Jul 06, 05:02 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Well, it was not that funny to make, so I dont bother to bother you guys with any more of it xDxD


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Posted: 08 Jul 06, 06:25 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<font color=FFFFOO>FreMe<h6>Get Down!!!! wrote:

Well, it was not that funny to make, so I dont bother to bother you guys with any more of it xDxD



Go on...dont worry about what people think, at least make a blog!!


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Posted: 08 Jul 06, 10:04 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

You need Fatty....

Perhaps a weeks supply of his favorite beverage might do the trick...


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Posted: 08 Jul 06, 10:08 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Haystacks Calhounski wrote:

You need Fatty....

Perhaps a weeks supply of his favorite beverage might do the trick...


Nothing will... I was born without a sense of humer :s.. That´s why I wont make more.. I just felt like anoying the story haters on Queenzone xD


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Posted: 08 Jul 06, 17:06 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Erin wrote:

What are you talking about, Pieter??!! That story like TOTALLY RAWKED!!!


Well, FreMe, she seemed to like it!!11!

Oh, wait, she was being sarcastic.


I'm so pissed I could spit.
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Posted: 08 Jul 06, 17:15 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I liked it a lot. It was funny. You should write more and include the rest of the Queen members.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cdoo21lvza8

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Posted: 08 Jul 06, 17:30 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<font color=>LadyMercury wrote:

Erin wrote:

What are you talking about, Pieter??!! That story like TOTALLY RAWKED!!!


Well, FreMe, she seemed to like it!!11!

Oh, wait, she was being sarcastic.


Woooow :o.. I did´nt realise that :o


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