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Posted: 23 Jul 06, 11:25 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

okay, i'm really bored, so i decided to write this poem. sorry if it's crap.:(

There's a man with talent,
who always knew his dreams.
some people say they knew him,
but they are all just schemes.
he knew he was going to be a star,
a legend with a name,
he laughed at the sign of danger,
and learned to play the game.
he never backed down,but put up a fight,
and now he's gone away,
the man who knew it all,
but to me he's here to stay.


you will remember,when this is blown over, and everything's all by the way...
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Posted: 23 Jul 06, 11:26 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Please feel free to write any of your own poems if you have any, i want to hear them! he he


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Posted: 23 Jul 06, 11:29 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Aaaw, nice poem! :)

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Posted: 23 Jul 06, 12:28 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Fab!

Freddie... dear Freddie
You are always in my thoughts
And i'd very much like to see you in shorts!

Some guys(and girls) think you're sexy and tough
And i think i prefer to see you with handcuffs!

On stage with that sexy, tight attire!
AND JESUS CHRIST, YOU'RE HOTTER THAN FIRE!!!

When i first saw you my heart when BOOOOOMMMM!!
So, you can guess that i would like to show you my bedroom!

You are the love of my life, the singer of songs...
And at Live at the Bowl you should of wore a thong!

End.

Sorry if it's a little.... 'hot under the collar'!








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Posted: 23 Jul 06, 12:30 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I hate poems, so I wont even read any of these.. I just HAD to reply because I saw Flashys ´name :D


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Posted: 23 Jul 06, 12:32 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<font color=FFFFOO>FreMe<h6>Get Down!!!! wrote:

I hate poems, so I wont even read any of these.. I just HAD to reply because I saw Flashys ´name :D


You know, you are such a darling! You like my sexy poem?? lol! :/


"It’s not often we play in daylight, and I fucking well wish we did before, I can see you all now. And there are some beauties here tonight, I can tell you!" ;)
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Posted: 23 Jul 06, 12:57 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

that's awesome! I agree with the thong and handcuff parts!:)


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Posted: 23 Jul 06, 14:04 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Wow!! Those were some great poems nevermore:) and Flash! I swear I could never write something like that! Way to go you guys!!! Please, if you have anymore, share 'em!!! I just love rhythmical(sp? :P) poems.....especially if they're about Freddie!! Seriously, those poems made my boring ass morning great! Thanks again for sharing them! :D


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Posted: 23 Jul 06, 15:53 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

freddie loves spagettii
even though hes old roger doesnt look like a yeti
brian is just like a teddy
john just is never ready
im sorry if you think this is scary


your words. not mine.
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Posted: 23 Jul 06, 16:03 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

freddie likes candy
and rogers just dandy
brian is handy
john is ugly


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Posted: 23 Jul 06, 16:04 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

(sorry, if your in love with john, but i coulndt think of anything that rhymed)


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Posted: 23 Jul 06, 19:18 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<font color="red">The Audacity of Kelley wrote:

Ack !

John was always quite so they never knew
All the crazy things he could really do
People were shocked when they saw
Him having a life and gaped in awe
He was always so cute and sweet
Slightly prim and always neat
So now he has a poem several couplets long
Not nearly as good as Brian's birthday song
But it's the best we could do
So this is the silly poem from me to you
We love you John of the Impressively Common name
You're better than Harry Potter and should by right have more fame




LOL!!! I love it!!!! Its great!

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Posted: 24 Jul 06, 00:34 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Freddie Mercury, what's in a name?
When we think of him, we think of his fame
And of the joy he brought to so many
With his smile, his eyes, his infectious energy
He made us laugh, he made us cry
Now he's gone and we still wonder "Why"?
Freddie Mercury, what's in a name
To remember him, is to honor him
And in that I find no shame.


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Posted: 24 Jul 06, 00:35 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Chris L ? wrote:

Freddie Mercury, what's in a name?
When we think of him, we think of his fame
And of the joy he brought to so many
With his smile, his eyes, his infectious energy
He made us laugh, he made us cry
Now he's gone and we still wonder "Why"?
Freddie Mercury, what's in a name
To remember him, is to honor him
And in that I find no shame.




That is great!!!! WOW! !I love it!

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Posted: 24 Jul 06, 00:38 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Freddie took our love
and then he rolled it up
rolled it up a hill
like a ball of snow
like a snowball grows
until it gets too big
until he lost control
and it rolled back down
and it rolled back down
and it rolled back down
and it rolled back down

He took a tiny bit
and rolled it up again
slower than before
he went a step too far
he had to let it go
i saw it go straight down
then Freddie turned around
started up again
started up again
started up again
started up again

eyes were made for looking'
hands were made for holdin'
hearts were made for lovin'
lips were made for kissin'
legs were made for walkin'
tracks were made to follow
that's what i'm gonna do
two tracks
in the snow
two tracks
up that hill
Our hearts broke
when dear Freddie left
no tracks behind


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Freedom from choice is what you want



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Posted: 24 Jul 06, 00:40 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

The Artist Formerly Known As Paul JR wrote:

Freddie took our love
and then he rolled it up
rolled it up a hill
like a ball of snow
like a snowball grows
until it gets too big
until he lost control
and it rolled back down
and it rolled back down
and it rolled back down
and it rolled back down

He took a tiny bit
and rolled it up again
slower than before
he went a step too far
he had to let it go
i saw it go straight down
then Freddie turned around
started up again
started up again
started up again
started up again

eyes were made for looking'
hands were made for holdin'
hearts were made for lovin'
lips were made for kissin'
legs were made for walkin'
tracks were made to follow
that's what i'm gonna do
two tracks
in the snow
two tracks
up that hill
Our hearts broke
when dear Freddie left
no tracks behind







Its lovely! But why the hell do you have to include a HILL in it!!!!!! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! you know i hate that damn movie!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 24 Jul 06, 00:43 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

<font color="FF3366">?DeadOnTime wrote:

The Artist Formerly Known As Paul JR wrote:

Freddie took our love
and then he rolled it up
rolled it up a hill
like a ball of snow
like a snowball grows
until it gets too big
until he lost control
and it rolled back down
and it rolled back down
and it rolled back down
and it rolled back down

He took a tiny bit
and rolled it up again
slower than before
he went a step too far
he had to let it go
i saw it go straight down
then Freddie turned around
started up again
started up again
started up again
started up again

eyes were made for looking'
hands were made for holdin'
hearts were made for lovin'
lips were made for kissin'
legs were made for walkin'
tracks were made to follow
that's what i'm gonna do
two tracks
in the snow
two tracks
up that hill
Our hearts broke
when dear Freddie left
no tracks behind







Its lovely! But why the hell do you have to include a HILL in it!!!!!! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! you know i hate that damn movie!!!!!!!!


its a parody of a Devo song honey


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Posted: 24 Jul 06, 00:46 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

The Artist Formerly Known As Paul JR wrote:

Freddie took our love
and then he rolled it up
rolled it up a hill
like a ball of snow
like a snowball grows
until it gets too big
until he lost control
and it rolled back down
and it rolled back down
and it rolled back down
and it rolled back down

He took a tiny bit
and rolled it up again
slower than before
he went a step too far
he had to let it go
i saw it go straight down
then Freddie turned around
started up again
started up again
started up again
started up again

eyes were made for looking'
hands were made for holdin'
hearts were made for lovin'
lips were made for kissin'
legs were made for walkin'
tracks were made to follow
that's what i'm gonna do
two tracks
in the snow
two tracks
up that hill
Our hearts broke
when dear Freddie left
no tracks behind


That is pretty good. I like!!!


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"I WANT TO BREAK FREE"
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Posted: 24 Jul 06, 00:47 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I liked it so much, I double posted. LOL


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