Well, I have to say, I'm quite impressed! At first, I thought "Oh shit! A hip hop version!", but it does kind of work, and you've synched it almost perfectly. The edits to keep it in time are very good. Just a couple of things I didn't like - there's a bit of piano, perhaps from SYW about a third of the way through, which sounds a bit off key, and I didn't really like the guitar solo being drowned, but apart from that, well done!
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