On the other hand... hehe..
This one is a great idea and it could be excellent, but it seems slightly mis-timed at times and the vocal is mixed to both channels sort of strangely. Normally there's a "centerness" to lead vox, but I don't know what you had to work with.
If you need the full center channel of that mix untouched, I'll be happy to provide it privately. I think the rules about sharing single channels are a bit iffy around here. Perhaps you used a version that had been altered and channeled into stereo or something.