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Posted: 09 Nov 06, 15:45 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

i was in a sad mood :S


Love of Night

I’ve been wandering around for years,
hours in the dark.
My body is aching but my mind is forcing me.
I have to go on,
there is nothing more to lose.
Everything I loved has gone,
I tried running away,
But my darkest fear is chasing me,
But it’s impossible to run,
I can’t carry myself anymore,
my mind is getting weak.
While I’m walking trough the black of night,
I see something sparkling.
It’s a shining like beautiful star,
While I see a shade dooming in front of me,
The moon disappears behind the clouds.
Rain is falling,
All I can hear is a scream of pain.
Hell is coming to get me-
But just when I thought I was lost,
Clouds shove aside and a light shines brightly over the night.
It’s Mother Mercury,
coming to help me.
She flew down to earth and touched me with her wing.
Soft as the summer breeze,
tender like a girl.
She takes me in her arms and takes me away,
to the light, higher and higher.
I see the love,
The Love of Night.


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Posted: 09 Nov 06, 19:07 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Pretty good!


"On the first day Pim & Niek created a heavenly occupation. Pim & Niek blessed it and named it 'Loosch'."



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Posted: 10 Nov 06, 15:57 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Thank you

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Posted: 11 Nov 06, 07:37 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Now I will steal your poem and claim it as my own and read it to little blind children... just because I can.


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Posted: 11 Nov 06, 13:08 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

:D:D:D