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Posted: 11 Apr 07, 20:12 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Tomorrow's Poem in a Pocket Day and I'm screwed! I need a PG poem about Queen or rock 'n' roll or whatever. I need it quick!!! Could you guys PLEASE help me?


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Posted: 11 Apr 07, 20:28 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

It doesn't HAVE to be written by me, and I can't find anything online. The closest I found was a stupid corny poem by Shel Silverstein titled "rock 'n' Roll Band" which is about a bunch of 1o year olds trying to form a band. There are many smart people on this site, and I don't wanna copy lyrics of a song cuz then it'll sound kind aweird. But I'll try! However, in teh meantime, if anything cute comes to mind, please post it up!


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Posted: 11 Apr 07, 20:33 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

I once seen a poem by Roger online called Blue Eyes of Heaven but I forgot where I saw it. : (


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Posted: 11 Apr 07, 21:26 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

just put random words together


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Posted: 11 Apr 07, 23:00 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

www.queenmoderntimesrocknroll.com

or www.ledzeppelinrocknroll.com


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Posted: 11 Apr 07, 23:07 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Just use a Brian song. Most are pretty much poems anyway.


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Posted: 12 Apr 07, 00:02 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Rock 'n Roll is a way to pay the bills,
But football is what give us thrills.
They're always sayin'
stop that playin'
Keep those Rock 'N Roll skills

L.


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Posted: 12 Apr 07, 00:11 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

There once was a band called Queen
Critics to them were mean
Queen said "Stuff you all
we're having a ball"
Then they did some other real cool stuff...

I don't know! We get taught how to study poems, not write them, for example, in the last line I used iambic pentameter hehehe.
But as far as poem writing goes, I'm as usless as a sack of potatoes on a unicycle

[EDIT] And what is Poem in a Pocket Day?


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Posted: 12 Apr 07, 00:24 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

My suggestion to you is to write something down how you feel about rock and roll, queen ect. I hope that helps.


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Posted: 12 Apr 07, 01:34 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Queen Is The Best
They Have All The Rest
Keep That In Mind
Or You Shall Find
That Deaky Hit You In The Chest


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Posted: 12 Apr 07, 05:44 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Deep is the sound out of the strings
The voice travels on its golden wings
The beat of the drums echoes in our heart
And the softness of the bass not far apart


...(to be continued, my sister is calling me)





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Posted: 12 Apr 07, 06:02 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Elizabeth Knightson wrote:

Deep is the sound out of the strings
The voice travels on its golden wings
The beat of the drums echoes in our heart
And the softness of the bass not far apart


...(to be continued, my sister is calling me)




damn that's good


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Posted: 12 Apr 07, 06:16 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Too late it is,
The recording is done,
My mind is spinning,
I can't let it go.

Morning comes,
I'm behind my bass,
Creating the melodies I hear in my head,
The words obsessing in my mind,
I must remember to write them down.

Now it's midday and I'm still here,
Five minutes of bass recorded,
It is time for my guitar to be heard,
I sit there wondering...

When will I be freed?
This dank, dark room is closing in on me,
I can't take much more of this,
I create the drum beat out of pure anger.

Night falls and the power cuts out,
I'm left sitting here behind my piano,
Pounding the keys into my melody,
Molding the sound to fit.

Now It's Monday Morning,
My band mates come into the studio,
They find me asleep on the floor,
My microphone is my teddy,
The song is finally recorded,
But I am dead.




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Posted: 12 Apr 07, 09:51 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Er was eens een zanger uit Londen
Werd door heel wat mannen verslonden
Ze zeiden hem steeds,
Van zaad krijg je AIDS,
Dat heeft hij nu zelf ondervonden




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Posted: 12 Apr 07, 09:53 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Rock out with your cock out.


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Posted: 12 Apr 07, 10:11 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Donny Mars wrote:

Queen by Donny Mars

Ready for Freddie
Cryin with Brian
Dodging Roger
Gone to John
Queen is mean
in a good way
today
rock n roll dreams
mocking your steam


Wow. That's awful.


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Posted: 12 Apr 07, 12:50 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

FriedChicken<br><font size=1>The Almighty</font> wrote:

Er was eens een zanger uit Londen
Werd door heel wat mannen verslonden
Ze zeiden hem steeds,
Van zaad krijg je AIDS,
Dat heeft hij nu zelf ondervonden




It's in dutch, sorry if it isn't of any help for you

Haha, that's pretty cool.


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Posted: 12 Apr 07, 13:01 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

i needed a rhyme
but i ain't got time
i asked around
and ran aground
the twats at queenzone
told me go it alone
so here i am standed
or maybe caught red-handed
because my poem-stealing stunt
makes me a plagiaristic c*nt



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Posted: 12 Apr 07, 13:49 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

The metre sucks, but I love where you're going with the message :P


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Posted: 12 Apr 07, 17:17 Edit this post Reply to this post Reply with Quote

Well...they're nice. I'm serious! They are! they're better than what I can come up with anyway.


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